-My editor gave me an assignment-only write short sentences. Twelve words at most, up to fifteen if must
-Have been doing that on practice writes.. Work stuff too
-The sentences here are so long. I've been treating them as notes, but that's no excuse
-Here's the idea-all personal writing will be short_ To be better, I must practice properly. There are no cheats.
-For the foreseeable future, my sentences will be terse. Makes them less rambling, and to-the-point-I won't cheat using dashes either.
-The other feedback was around flow. My sentences don't have that. He suggested I read a lot and copy styles. I read so much news. Not a great source to copy. Must start reading more
-Limitations incubate creativity. My journey starts!
-Aug 29 afternoon, Seattle office downstairs
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